As many have already stated, the book feels rushed, the All I want for Christmas is Kiss ugly sweater characters seem to just get odd and out of character. I had a hard time stomaching that Bella “hated getting married”. She loves him enough to die but will not marry him? That is hard to swallow. She is terribly irritated by the whole proposal (if you can call it that). She could care less about her wedding, having wanted to get married in a Vegas drive-thru chapel in her sweats. Gag. Not in line with the character up to that point at all. Her wedding has nearly no description. I have no idea what she looked like. Very poor.
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Then the honeymoon. The scene from their first time is horrible. She walks into the All I want for Christmas is Kiss ugly sweater water! Really!? I am not into smut books or sex scenes but it should have been kissing, holding, surrender… SOMETHING! Then, SUDDENLY she is pregnant, super accelerated of course! The baby is a mutant child that is killing them both. Bella is at peace with the whole thing and has Rosalie as her personal guard. She is hell-bent on having the child and is in love with the child that is breaking her bones and killing her. blech! Edward is miserable until he can hear the child, then suddenly is all on board. sigh.